[blog] 03/07: Drp some unnecessary commas that slow up reading.

[Chris Lamb]

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commit 2b50931d1d266ee877b6d194cc3b7cfa59ce541a
Author: Chris Lamb <lamby at debian.org>
Date:   Mon Nov 21 13:44:29 2016 +0100

    Drp some unnecessary commas that slow up reading.
    
    Signed-off-by: Chris Lamb <lamby at debian.org>
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 drafts/82.mdwn | 6 +++---
 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)

diff --git a/drafts/82.mdwn b/drafts/82.mdwn
index 5b69e1c..f5ea7a8 100644
--- a/drafts/82.mdwn
+++ b/drafts/82.mdwn
@@ -87,10 +87,10 @@ debrepatch development
 
 Background:
 [debrepatch](https://anonscm.debian.org/cgit/reproducible/debrepatch.git) is a
-set of scripts that we're currently developing, to make it easier to track
-unapplied patches. We have a lot of those, and we're not sure if they still
+set of scripts that we're currently developing to make it easier to track
+unapplied patches. We have a lot of those and we're not always sure if they still
 work. The plan is to set up jobs to automatically apply old reproducibility
-patches to newer versions of packages, and notify the right people if they
+patches to newer versions of packages and notify the right people if they
 don't apply and/or no longer make the package reproducible.
 
 [debpatch](https://anonscm.debian.org/cgit/reproducible/debrepatch.git/tree/debpatch)

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