[reproducible-website] 01/05: Adjust comma usage in definition.

[Chris Lamb]

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commit 303573696a93194d213e36d3c853ef44adcc15e5
Author: Chris Lamb <lamby at debian.org>
Date:   Tue Dec 20 10:01:59 2016 +0000

    Adjust comma usage in definition.
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 _docs/definition.md | 6 +++---
 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)

diff --git a/_docs/definition.md b/_docs/definition.md
index 1b56bcb..493adfb 100644
--- a/_docs/definition.md
+++ b/_docs/definition.md
@@ -5,12 +5,12 @@ permalink: /docs/definition/
 ---
 
 ## When is a build reproducible?
-A build is **reproducible** if, given the same source code, build environment and
+A build is **reproducible** if given the same source code, build environment and
 build instructions, any party can recreate bit-by-bit identical copies of all
 specified artifacts.
 
 The relevant attributes of the build environment, the build instructions and
-the source code, as well as the expected reproducible artifacts, are defined by
+the source code as well as the expected reproducible artifacts are defined by
 the authors or distributors. The artifacts of a build are the parts of the
 build results that are the desired primary output.
 
@@ -20,7 +20,7 @@ a source code archive.
 
 **Relevant attributes of the build environment** would usually include dependencies
 and their versions, build configuration flags and some environment variables as
-far as they are used by the build system, such as for example, locale. It is
+far as they are used by the build system such as, for example, the locale. It is
 preferable to reduce the set of relevant attributes of the build environment.
 
 **Artifacts**, for example, would include executables, distribution packages or

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