[blog] 01/01: 90: Misc updates.

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Author: Chris Lamb <lamby at debian.org>
Date:   Tue Jan 17 09:29:58 2017 +1100

    90: Misc updates.
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 drafts/90.mdwn | 33 +++++++++++++++++----------------
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index 1ae8e37..5bf4437 100644
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@@ -8,17 +8,18 @@ January 8 and Saturday January 14 2017:
 Reproducible work in other projects
 -----------------------------------
 
-[https://verification.f-droid.org/](https://verification.f-droid.org/) has been
-launched. It rebuilds apps from source that were built by f-droid.org and
-checks that the results match.
+The [F-Droid Verification Server](https://verification.f-droid.org/) has been
+launched. It rebuilds apps from source that were built by
+[f-droid.org](https://f-droid.org/) and checks that the results match.
 
 Bernhard M. Wiedemann [did some more work](
 https://lists.opensuse.org/opensuse-factory/2017-01/msg00120.html) on
 reproducibility for openSUSE.
 
-http://bootstrappable.org/ (unfortunately no HTTPS yet) was launched at the
-RWS2. This is another topic related to reproducible builds, and both will be
-needed in order to do Diverse Double Compilation in practise in the future.
+[Bootstrappable.org](http://bootstrappable.org) (unfortunately no HTTPS yet)
+was launched after the initial work was started at our recent summit in Berlin.
+This is another topic related to reproducible builds and both will be needed in
+order to perform "Diverse Double Compilation" in practice in the future.
 
 
 Toolchain development and fixes
@@ -29,10 +30,10 @@ Chris Lamb forwarded [[!bug 849972]] upstream to
 generator. Upstream has fixed the issue as of [release
 0.9.6](https://github.com/lsegal/yard/issues/1049).
 
-Alexander Couzens (lynxis) has made `mksquashfs`
-[reproducible](https://github.com/squashfs-tools/squashfs-tools), and is
+Alexander Couzens (lynxis) [has made `mksquashfs`
+reproducible](https://github.com/squashfs-tools/squashfs-tools) and is
 [looking for testers](https://lunarius.fe80.eu/blog/mksquash-dot-graph.html).
-It compiles on BSD systems: FreeBSD, OpenBSD, NetBSD.
+It compiles on BSD systems such as FreeBSD, OpenBSD and NetBSD.
 
 
 Bugs filed
@@ -54,8 +55,8 @@ Nicola Corna:
 Reviews of unreproducible packages
 ----------------------------------
 
-13 package reviews have been added, 0 have been updated and 13 have been
-removed in this week, adding to our knowledge about [identified
+13 package reviews have been added and 13 have been removed in this week,
+adding to our knowledge about [identified
 issues](https://tests.reproducible-builds.org/debian/index_issues.html).
 
 1 issue type has been added:
@@ -77,9 +78,9 @@ and reported by:
 diffoscope development
 ----------------------
 
-Many bugs [were opened in diffoscope](../../images/diffoscope_bugs_2016.png) in the
-past few weeks, and we were hard at work squashing them all in time for Debian
-stable.
+Many bugs [were opened in diffoscope](../../images/diffoscope_bugs_2016.png)
+during the past few weeks and we have been hard at work squashing them all in
+time for Debian stable.
 
 - Mattia Rizzolo:
   - Code quality and style improvements.
@@ -123,5 +124,5 @@ team](https://github.com/rust-lang/rust/pull/38348) on the topic.
 
 Daniel Shahaf filed [[!bug 851225]] to make it easier to track our patches.
 
-This week's edition was written by Ximin Luo and reviewed by a bunch of
-Reproducible Builds folks on IRC & the mailing lists.
+This week's edition was written by Ximin Luo, Chris Lamb and reviewed by a
+bunch of Reproducible Builds folks on IRC & the mailing lists.

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