[blog] 01/01: 99: Tighten some prose.

[Chris Lamb]

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commit f5c07956e76a281e70e425e775fc42d6a1b7f954
Author: Chris Lamb <lamby at debian.org>
Date:   Mon Mar 20 16:52:43 2017 +0000

    99: Tighten some prose.
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 drafts/99.mdwn | 19 +++++++++----------
 1 file changed, 9 insertions(+), 10 deletions(-)

diff --git a/drafts/99.mdwn b/drafts/99.mdwn
index cc0e9ff..366fe53 100644
--- a/drafts/99.mdwn
+++ b/drafts/99.mdwn
@@ -10,14 +10,13 @@ Reproducible Builds Hackathon Hamburg 2017
 
 The [Reproducible Builds Hamburg Hackathon
 2017](https://wiki.debian.org/ReproducibleBuilds/HamburgHackathon2017), or
-RB-HH-2017 for short, is a 3 day hacking event taking place in the CCC Hamburg
-Hackerspace located inside the Frappant, which is collective art space located
-in a historical monument in Hamburg, Germany.
+RB-HH-2017 for short is a 3 day hacking event taking place in the CCC Hamburg
+Hackerspace located inside Frappant, as collective art space located in a
+historical monument in Hamburg, Germany.
 
 The aim of the hackathon is to spent some days working on Reproducible Builds
 in every distribution and project. The event is open to anybody interested on
-working on Reproducible Builds issues in any distro or project, with or without
-prior experience!
+working on Reproducible Builds issues, with or without prior experience!
 
 Accomodation is available and travel sponsorship may be available by agreement.
 Please register your interest as soon as possible.
@@ -26,9 +25,9 @@ Please register your interest as soon as possible.
 Reproducible Builds Summit Berlin 2016
 --------------------------------------
 
-This is just a quick note, that all [pads we've
+This is just a quick note, that [all the pads we've
 written](https://reproducible-builds.org/events/berlin2016/agenda/) during the
-[summit in Berlin in December
+[Berlin summit in December
 2016](https://reproducible-builds.org/events/berlin2016/) are now online
 (thanks to Holger), nicely complementing the [report by Aspiration
 Tech](https://reproducible-builds.org/files/ReproducibleBuildsSummitIIReport.pdf).
@@ -147,10 +146,10 @@ Chris Lamb:
 tests.reproducible-builds.org
 -----------------------------
 
-* The challenge for 100% reproducible BSD is still up: currently it's [99.6%
+* The challenge for 100% reproducible BSD continues: currently it's [99.6%
   for FreeBSD](https://tests.reproducible-builds.org/freebsd/) and [98.1% for
-  NetBSD](https://tests.reproducible-builds.org/netbsd/) - and in both cases this
-  is just for their base system, without any ports build yet.
+  NetBSD](https://tests.reproducible-builds.org/netbsd/). In both cases this
+  is just for their base system, without any ports built yet.
 
 * Holger setup a jenkins job to build
   [build-path-prefix-map-spec.git](https://anonscm.debian.org/git/reproducible/build-path-prefix-map-spec.git)

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