[blog] 01/02: 100: Tidy blog post language, etc.

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Author: Chris Lamb <lamby at debian.org>
Date:   Tue Mar 28 08:37:39 2017 +0100

    100: Tidy blog post language, etc.
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 [[!meta title="Reproducible Builds: week 100 in Stretch cycle"]]
 
-Here's what happened in the [Reproducible Builds](https://reproducible-builds.org) effort between Sunday March 19 and Saturday March 25 2017:
+*Welcome to the 100th issue of this weekly news!* We hope you have been enjoying our posts and would love to [receive some feedback via our mailing list](mailto:rb-general at lists.reproducible-builds.org)!
 
-*Welcome to the 100th issue of this weekly news!* We hope you're enjoying our posts and would love to [get some feedback](mailto:rb-general at lists.reproducible-builds.org)!
+Anyway, here's what happened in the [Reproducible Builds](https://reproducible-builds.org) effort between Sunday March 19 and Saturday March 25 2017:
 
 Reproducible Builds Hackathon Hamburg 2017
 ------------------------------------------
 
 The [Reproducible Builds Hamburg Hackathon
-2017](https://wiki.debian.org/ReproducibleBuilds/HamburgHackathon2017), or
-RB-HH-2017 for short is a 3 day hacking event taking place May 5th-7th in the CCC Hamburg
-Hackerspace located inside Frappant, as collective art space located in a
+2017](https://wiki.debian.org/ReproducibleBuilds/HamburgHackathon2017) (or
+RB-HH-2017 for short) is a 3-day hacking event taking place May 5th-7th in the CCC Hamburg
+Hackerspace inside Frappant, as collective art space located witin a
 historical monument in Hamburg, Germany. The event is open to everyone and
-we still have some free seats. If you intend to attend, please register your
+we still have some free seats. If you wish to attend, please register your
 interest as soon as possible.
 
 
 Media coverage
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-* Sylvain Beucler wrote an interesting article about [his experiences making software reproducible](http://blog.beuc.net/posts/Practical_basics_of_reproducible_builds/).
+* Sylvain Beucler wrote an interesting article about his experiences making software reproducible called [Practical basics of reproducible builds](http://blog.beuc.net/posts/Practical_basics_of_reproducible_builds/).
 
-* Matthew Garrett made a blog post [announcing the Shim review process](http://mjg59.dreamwidth.org/47438.html) where did just that. One interesting detail in the [current recommendations](https://docs.google.com/document/d/1gHFkhMmn6VVvVQim5YcjJ8uc3xf1JHQnA9f8KSE6qqY/edit?usp=sharing) is that they expect reproducible builds. Upon asking whether this means "bit by bit identical reproducible builds" he explained that this is indeed the goal (given the same toolchain and gnu-efi, except fo [...]
+* Matthew Garrett published a blog post [announcing the Shim review process](http://mjg59.dreamwidth.org/47438.html). One interesting detail in the [current recommendations](https://docs.google.com/document/d/1gHFkhMmn6VVvVQim5YcjJ8uc3xf1JHQnA9f8KSE6qqY/edit?usp=sharing) is that they expect the builds to be "bit-for-bit" reproducible assuming the same toolchain and `gnu-efi`. This currently does not extend to the randomly generated embedded certificate though they also plan to address th [...]
 
 * Holger Levsen gave a talk at the [German Unix User Group's "Frühjahrsfachgespräch"](http://www.guug.de/veranstaltungen/ffg2017/)
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