[blog] 02/02: Aesthetic changes.

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commit dac7fa9693d9fc64cd81f90e1407712d84085565
Author: Chris Lamb <lamby at debian.org>
Date:   Tue May 16 15:42:06 2017 +0100

    Aesthetic changes.
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 drafts/107.mdwn | 33 +++++++++++++++------------------
 1 file changed, 15 insertions(+), 18 deletions(-)

diff --git a/drafts/107.mdwn b/drafts/107.mdwn
index acf3f8b..7045485 100644
--- a/drafts/107.mdwn
+++ b/drafts/107.mdwn
@@ -8,31 +8,29 @@ Saturday May 13 2017:
 Report from Reproducible Builds Hamburg Hackathon
 -------------------------------------------------
 
-From May 4th til May 7/8th we met in Hamburg, Germany, for the [first Reproducible Builds hackathon](https://wiki.debian.org/ReproducibleBuilds/HamburgHackathon2017), this is a short summary what we did there:
-
-We were 16 participants from 12 projects: 7 Debian, 2 repeatr.io, 1 Arch Linux, 1 coreboot + LEDE, 1 FDroid, 1 ElectroBSD + privoxy, 1 GNU R, 1 in-toto.io, 1 Meson, 1 openSUSE. Three people were coming from the USA, 3 from the UK, 2 Finnland, 1 Austrian, 1 Danmark, 6 from Germany plus we several guests from the CCCHH hackerspace as well as a guest from Australia…
+We were 16 participants from 12 projects: 7 Debian, 2 repeatr.io, 1 ArchLinux, 1 coreboot + LEDE, 1 FDroid, 1 ElectroBSD + privoxy, 1 GNU R, 1 in-toto.io, 1 Meson and 1 openSUSE. Three people came from the USA, 3 from the UK, 2 Finland, 1 Austria, 1 Denmark and 6 from Germany, plus we several guests from our gracious hosts at the CCCHH hackerspace as well as a guest from Australia…
 
 We had three presentations:
 
-- about Reproducible Builds everywhere by h01ger
-- about https://in-toto.io by Justin Cappos
-- about of http://repeatr.io by Eric Myhre
+- "Reproducible Builds everywhere" by h01ger
+-  https://in-toto.io by Justin Cappos
+- http://repeatr.io by Eric Myhre
 
-Obviously, being 16 people together we hacked on a lot of things. These included:
+We hacked on a large number of things including:
 
 - h01ger restarted the [policy discussion in #844431](https://bugs.debian.org/844431)
-- FIXME: PLEASE ADD WHAT YOU DID HERE
 - Justin Cappos started to write a paper. (FIXME: link to ML thread)
 - Chris Lamb (lamby) filed a number of patches for individual packages, worked on diffoscope, merged many changes to `strip-nondeterminism` and also filed [[!bug 862073]] against dak to upload buildinfo files to external services.
+- FIXME: PLEASE ADD WHAT YOU DID HERE
 
-Last but not least, we had a lot of fun in the hackerspace, enjoyed some of their gimmicks,
-like being able to open physical doors with ssh and the like.
+Last but not least, we had a lot of fun in the hackerspace, enjoying some of their gimmicks,
+such as being able to open physical doors with `ssh`.
 
 [<img width="360" alt="Not quite the hackathon"
 src="/blog/images/hamburg-hackathon-2017.jpg"
 />](/blog/images/hamburg-hackathon-2017.jpg)
 
-(This wasn't the hackathon, but some of us appreciated these sights and so we thought you would too.)
+(This wasn't the hackathon per-se, but some of us appreciated these sights and so we thought you would too.)
 
 Thanks to:
 
@@ -52,9 +50,8 @@ being able to secure their infrastructure at all times. Reproducible Builds
 help mitigate this by allowing independent verification of build results, by
 parties that are unaffected by the compromise.
 
-(And please don't get us wrong: this can happen to *anyone*. Kudos to openSUSE
-for being open about it. Now let's continue working on reproducible builds
-everywhere!)
+(Whilst this can happen to *anyone*. Kudos to openSUSE for being open about it.
+Now let's continue working on Reproducible Builds everywhere!)
 
 On May 13th Chris Lamb gave a talk on Reproducible Builds at [OSCAL
 2017](https://oscal.openlabs.cc/) in Tirana, Albania.
@@ -68,7 +65,7 @@ Toolchain bug reports and fixes
 -------------------------------
 
 - Chris Lamb:
-  * Fixed [[!bug 842635]], [[!bug 858389]] for [[!pkg docbook-to-man]] by
+  * Fixed a long-standing toolchain issue ([[!bug 842635]], [[!bug 858389]]) in [[!pkg docbook-to-man]] by
     adopting the package.
   * [[!bug 862003]] filed against [[!pkg debhelper]].
   * [[!bug 862073]] filed against ftp.debian.org, to upload buildinfo files to
@@ -131,7 +128,7 @@ During our reproducibility testing, FTBFS bugs have been detected and reported b
 diffoscope development
 ----------------------
 
-diffoscope development continued in [git on the experimental
+diffoscope development continued [on the experimental
 branch](https://anonscm.debian.org/git/reproducible/diffoscope.git/log/?h=experimental):
 
 - Maria Glukhova:
@@ -144,7 +141,7 @@ branch](https://anonscm.debian.org/git/reproducible/diffoscope.git/log/?h=experi
 strip-nondeterminism development
 --------------------------------
 
-- strip-nondeterminism 0.033-1 and 2 were uploaded to unstable by Chris Lamb. It included [contributions](https://anonscm.debian.org/git/reproducible/strip-nondeterminism.git/log/?h=debian/0.033-2) from:
+- strip-nondeterminism `0.033-1` and `-2` were uploaded to unstable by Chris Lamb. It included [contributions](https://anonscm.debian.org/git/reproducible/strip-nondeterminism.git/log/?h=debian/0.033-2) from:
 
 - Bernhard M. Wiedemann:
   - Add cpio handler.
@@ -157,7 +154,7 @@ strip-nondeterminism development
 reprotest development
 ---------------------
 
-- reprotest 0.6.1 and .2 were uploaded to unstable by Ximin Luo. It included [contributions](https://anonscm.debian.org/git/reproducible/reprotest.git/log/?h=debian/0.6.2) from:
+- reprotest `0.6.1` and `0.6.2` were uploaded to unstable by Ximin Luo. It included [contributions](https://anonscm.debian.org/git/reproducible/reprotest.git/log/?h=debian/0.6.2) from:
 
 - Ximin Luo:
   * Add a documentation section on "Known bugs".

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