[blog] 01/01: 115: some style fixes, word wrapping, and order authors based on amount of content contributed

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Author: Ximin Luo <infinity0 at debian.org>
Date:   Tue Jul 11 15:20:25 2017 +0200

    115: some style fixes, word wrapping, and order authors based on amount of content contributed
    
    the comma after "rustc" is important to disambiguous sentence structure from
    - "X was the main issue with (Y which was P)" vs
    - "(X was the main issue with Y) which was P"
---
 drafts/115.mdwn | 24 +++++++++++++-----------
 1 file changed, 13 insertions(+), 11 deletions(-)

diff --git a/drafts/115.mdwn b/drafts/115.mdwn
index ff62bcd..96526f2 100644
--- a/drafts/115.mdwn
+++ b/drafts/115.mdwn
@@ -8,11 +8,12 @@ Saturday July 8 2017:
 Reproducible work in other projects
 -----------------------------------
 
-Ed Maste pointed to [a thread on the LLVM developer mailing list](http://lists.llvm.org/pipermail/llvm-dev/2017-July/115025.html)
-regarding container iteration being the main source of
-non-determinism in LLVM with discussion on how to solve this. Ignoring build
-path issues, container iteration order was also the main issue with rustc
-which was fixed by using a [fixed-order hash
+Ed Maste pointed to [a thread on the LLVM developer mailing
+list](http://lists.llvm.org/pipermail/llvm-dev/2017-July/115025.html) about
+container iteration being the main source of non-determinism in LLVM, together
+with discussion on how to solve this. Ignoring build path issues, container
+iteration order was also the main issue with rustc, which was fixed by using a
+[fixed-order hash
 map](https://github.com/rust-lang/rust/commit/e4791e086d671d429db864787f6b60547a28b0f5)
 for certain compiler structures. (It was unclear from the thread whether LLVM's
 builds are truly path-independent or rather that they haven't done comparisons
@@ -91,15 +92,16 @@ contributions from:
   - Fix a performance regression ([[!bug 865660]]) involving the Wagner-Fischer
     algorithm for calculating levenshtein distance.
 
-With these changes, we are able to generate a
-[dynamically loaded
-HTML diff](https://people.debian.org/~infinity0/repro/gcc-6-repro/gcc.diff.html/) for GCC-6 that can be displayed in a normal web browser. For more
-details see [this mailing list
+With these changes, we are able to generate a [dynamically loaded HTML
+diff](https://people.debian.org/~infinity0/repro/gcc-6-repro/gcc.diff.html/)
+for GCC-6 that can be displayed in a normal web browser. For more details see
+[this mailing list
 post](https://lists.reproducible-builds.org/pipermail/rb-general/2017-July/000559.html).
 
 
 Misc.
 -----
 
-This week's edition was written by Ximin Luo, Chris Lamb Bernhard M. Wiedemann &
-reviewed by a bunch of Reproducible Builds folks on IRC & the mailing lists.
+This week's edition was written by Ximin Luo, Bernhard M. Wiedemann and Chris
+Lamb & reviewed by a bunch of Reproducible Builds folks on IRC & the mailing
+lists.

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