[blog] 04/05: 135: Fixup some grammar, etc. for Reproducible Arch Linux.

[Chris Lamb]

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Author: Chris Lamb <lamby at debian.org>
Date:   Tue Nov 28 21:36:48 2017 +0900

    135: Fixup some grammar, etc. for Reproducible Arch Linux.
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@@ -12,22 +12,22 @@ Reproducible Builds will have an [assembly at 34c3](https://events.ccc.de/congre
 Reproducible Arch Linux
 -----------------------
 
-Since November 23 2017 [Arch Linux](https://www.archlinux.org) is again
+Since November 23 2017, [Arch Linux](https://www.archlinux.org) is again being
 [continuously tested for
-reproducibility](https://tests.reproducible-builds.org/archlinux/), however
-this time a patched pacman is used which can create reproducible packages.
+reproducibility](https://tests.reproducible-builds.org/archlinux/). However,
+this time a patched `pacman` is being used which can create reproducible packages.
 After 4 days of testing, 18% of all packages in the <em>core, extra, multilib
-and community</em> Arch repos has been tested, with these - very preliminary -
-results:
+and community</em> Arch repos has been tested, with these — very
+preliminary — results:
 
 * core: 77.1% reproducible, all 197 packages tested.
 * extra: 75.2% reproducible, 514 packages (of 2250 total) tested.
 * multilib: 82.6% reproducible, all 259 packages tested.
 * community: 76.5% reproducible, 487 packages (of 7739 total) tested.
 
-Jelle van der Waa also wrote a blog post [explaining some more details and how
-this alreay had lead to more QA work in Arch
-Linux.](http://vdwaa.nl/arch/linux/reproducible/builds/security/reproducible-builds-arch/)
+Jelle van der Waa also wrote [a blog post explaining more
+details](http://vdwaa.nl/arch/linux/reproducible/builds/security/reproducible-builds-arch/)
+detailing how this already had lead to more QA work in Arch.
 
 So all in all, <em>it looks like</em> 77.2% of the tested Arch Linux packages
 are now reproducible! With an unreleased pacman version and without some

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