[reproducible-website] 01/01: Misc updates.

[Chris Lamb]

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commit 7e603fca22fe4ad33afe0a33002f829302728e03
Author: Chris Lamb <lamby at debian.org>
Date:   Thu Mar 8 19:53:09 2018 -0800

    Misc updates.
---
 _includes/header.html |  2 +-
 funding.html          | 37 ++++++++++++++++++++++---------------
 2 files changed, 23 insertions(+), 16 deletions(-)

diff --git a/_includes/header.html b/_includes/header.html
index efba44a..965d285 100644
--- a/_includes/header.html
+++ b/_includes/header.html
@@ -18,7 +18,7 @@
         </a>
         <div class="trigger">
           {% for page in sorted_pages | sort:"order" %}
-            {% if page.title %}<a class="page-link" href="{{ page.url | prepend: site.baseurl }}">{{ page.title }}</a>{% endif %}
+            {% if page.title and page.order >= 0 %}<a class="page-link" href="{{ page.url | prepend: site.baseurl }}">{{ page.title }}</a>{% endif %}
           {% endfor %}
         </div>
       </nav>
diff --git a/funding.html b/funding.html
index 8f93e40..4b97ef2 100644
--- a/funding.html
+++ b/funding.html
@@ -1,6 +1,7 @@
 ---
 layout: page
-title: Funding
+title: Help fund the Reproducible Builds effort…
+order: -1
 permalink: /funding/
 ---
 
@@ -10,9 +11,9 @@ permalink: /funding/
   </div>
   <div class="eight columns">
     <p>
-      <em>The Reproducible Builds effort needs your help to continue its work
+      <em><big>The Reproducible Builds effort needs your help to continue its work
       towards ensuring the security of computer systems of all shapes and sizes
-      around the world.</em>
+      around the world.</big></em>
     </p>
   </div>
 </div>
@@ -23,26 +24,28 @@ permalink: /funding/
   </div>
   <div class="eight columns">
     <p>
-      As a quick refresher, whilst anyone can inspect the source code of free
-      and open source software for malicious flaws, most software is
-      distributed pre-compiled to end users.
+      Whilst anyone can inspect the source code of free and open source
+      software for malicious flaws, most software is distributed pre-compiled
+      to end users.
     </p>
     <p>
       The motivation behind the Reproducible Builds project is to permit
       verification that no flaws have been introduced during the compilation
       process—either maliciously or accidentally—by promising
       identical results are always generated from a given source, thus allowing
-      multiple third-parties to come to a consensus on whether a computer is
+      multiple third-parties to come to a consensus on whether a system is
       compromised.
     </p>
     <p>
       Your continued support will be key in solving this problem, which affects
-      computer systems of all sizes, from embedded microcontrollers to the
+      systems of all sizes, from embedded microcontrollers to the
       largest government systems.
     </p>
   </div>
 </div>
 
+<br>
+
 <div class="row">
   <div class="four columns title">
     <h2>Past work</h2>
@@ -51,9 +54,11 @@ permalink: /funding/
     <ul>
       <li>
         94% of packages in <a href="https://debian.org/">Debian</a> are
-        reproducible (in our current test framework), and <a href="https://www.debian.org/doc/debian-policy/">Debian Policy</a> now
-        recommends that builds are reproducible. <tt>.buildinfo</tt> support,
-        etc. merged into the official toolchain.
+        reproducible in our tests, and
+        <a href="https://www.debian.org/doc/debian-policy/">Debian Policy</a> now
+        recommends that builds are reproducible. Support for our build metadata
+        format (<tt>.buildinfo</tt>) has been merged into the official
+        toolchain.
       </li>
 
       <li>
@@ -93,17 +98,19 @@ permalink: /funding/
       </li>
 
       <li>
-       	Almost 3 years of regular weekly newsletters.
-        Regular internet-based meetings combined well as active and friendly
-        communications ensure that newcomers feel welcome and involved.
+        Almost 3 years of regular weekly newsletters as well as IRC-based
+        meetings. Friendly communications have ensured that newcomers from all
+        backgrounds feel involved and welcome.
       </li>
     </ol>
   </div>
 </div>
 
+<br>
+
 <div class="row">
   <div class="four columns title">
-    <h2>Suggested work</h2>
+    <h2>Future work</h2>
   </div>
   <div class="eight columns">
     <p>

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