Bug#334805: [Utnubu-maintainers] Bug#334805: dmraid: bad package description

[Henrique de Moraes Holschuh]

On Thu, 20 Oct 2005, Filippo Giunchedi wrote:
> please check out the new description:
> http://svn.debian.org/wsvn/utnubu/packages/dmraid/trunk/debian/?rev=0&sc=0

I'd change some stuff:

"The following chipsets are recognized:" is wrong. Chipsets have nothing to
do with it, and the list is not a list of chipsets either.  I much prefer
"The following formats are supported:"

Also, the highpoint entries can be merged, and probably DOS partitions are
recognized ONLY inside the mappings done by dm-raid, so "on SW RAIDS" would
be better written "inside the above"... BUT you already said that in the
first paragraph of the extended description, so deleting that item from the
list is better.

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  where the shadows lie." -- The Silicon Valley Tarot
  Henrique Holschuh