[Webapps-common-discuss] webapps-common/doc Makefile,1.1,1.2 Webapps-Policy-Manual-DRAFT.sgml,1.8,1.9

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Update of /cvsroot/webapps-common/webapps-common/doc
In directory haydn:/org/alioth.debian.org/chroot/home/users/seanius/tmp/cvs-serv3579

Modified Files:
	Makefile Webapps-Policy-Manual-DRAFT.sgml 
Log Message:
reworked "scope" section, that is not as redundant to the abstract

Index: Makefile
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvsroot/webapps-common/webapps-common/doc/Makefile,v
retrieving revision 1.1
retrieving revision 1.2
diff -u -d -r1.1 -r1.2
--- Makefile	15 May 2005 16:13:46 -0000	1.1
+++ Makefile	4 Jul 2005 18:35:25 -0000	1.2
@@ -1,5 +1,6 @@
 # example Makefile for viewing/editing an encrypted file
 FILEBASE = Webapps-Policy-Manual-DRAFT
+SRC := $(FILEBASE).sgml
 FILECRYPT = $(FILEPLAIN).gpg
 
 RM = /bin/rm -i
@@ -16,41 +17,42 @@
 	make tov;
 	make latex;
 clean:
-	@$(RM) -f $(FILEBASE).txt
-	@$(RM) -f $(FILEBASE).dvi
-	@$(RM) -rf $(FILEBASE)
-	@$(RM) -f $(FILEBASE).info
-	@$(RM) -f $(FILEBASE).tex
-	@$(RM) -f $(FILEBASE).pdf
-	@$(RM) -f $(FILEBASE).ps
-	@$(RM) -f $(FILEBASE).tov
-	@$(RM) -f $(FILEBASE).tpt
-	@$(RM) -f $(FILEBASE).xml
+	$(RM) -f $(FILEBASE).txt
+	$(RM) -f $(FILEBASE).dvi
+	$(RM) -rf $(FILEBASE)
+	$(RM) -f $(FILEBASE).info
+	$(RM) -f $(FILEBASE).tex
+	$(RM) -f $(FILEBASE).pdf
+	$(RM) -f $(FILEBASE).ps
+	$(RM) -f $(FILEBASE).tov
+	$(RM) -f $(FILEBASE).tpt
+	$(RM) -f $(FILEBASE).xml
 
-xml:
-	@debiandoc2docbookxml $(FILEBASE).sgml
+xml:	$(SRC)
+	debiandoc2docbookxml $(FILEBASE).sgml
 
-dvi:
-	@debiandoc2dvi $(FILEBASE).sgml
+dvi:	$(SRC)
+	debiandoc2dvi $(FILEBASE).sgml
 
-html:
-	@debiandoc2html $(FILEBASE).sgml
-	@mv $(FILEBASE).html $(FILEBASE)
+html:	$(SRC)
+	rm -rf $(FILEBASE)
+	debiandoc2html $(FILEBASE).sgml
+	mv $(FILEBASE).html $(FILEBASE)
 
-info:
-	@debiandoc2info $(FILEBASE).sgml
+info:	$(SRC)
+	debiandoc2info $(FILEBASE).sgml
 
-latex:
-	@debiandoc2latex $(FILEBASE).sgml
+latex:	$(SRC)
+	debiandoc2latex $(FILEBASE).sgml
 
-ps:
-	@debiandoc2ps $(FILEBASE).sgml
+ps:	$(SRC)
+	debiandoc2ps $(FILEBASE).sgml
 
-pdf:
-	@debiandoc2pdf $(FILEBASE).sgml
+pdf:	$(SRC)
+	debiandoc2pdf $(FILEBASE).sgml
 
-text:
-	@debiandoc2text $(FILEBASE).sgml
+text:	$(SRC)
+	debiandoc2text $(FILEBASE).sgml
 
-tov:
-	@debiandoc2textov $(FILEBASE).sgml
+tov:	$(SRC)
+	debiandoc2textov $(FILEBASE).sgml

Index: Webapps-Policy-Manual-DRAFT.sgml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvsroot/webapps-common/webapps-common/doc/Webapps-Policy-Manual-DRAFT.sgml,v
retrieving revision 1.8
retrieving revision 1.9
diff -u -d -r1.8 -r1.9
--- Webapps-Policy-Manual-DRAFT.sgml	29 Jun 2005 13:06:15 -0000	1.8
+++ Webapps-Policy-Manual-DRAFT.sgml	4 Jul 2005 18:35:25 -0000	1.9
@@ -35,23 +35,23 @@
 	<chapt id="about">About this manual
 		<sect id="about-scope">Scope
 			<p>
-				This manual describes the policy requirements for the packaging of web 
-				application in the Debian GNU/Linux distribution. 
-				This includes a description of the scope covered by this policy section, 
-				several design issues of web applications, as well as technical requirements
-				that each web application package must satisfy to be included in the 
-				distribution.
-			<p>
-				More and more web applications are packaged in Debian but the current <url id="http://www.debian.org/doc/debian-policy/" name="Debian
-				Policy Manual"> does not give guidelines to help web applications maintainers.
-			<p>
-				This Policy Manual aims to fill this blank.
+				This manual aims to clarify the
+				standards and technical requirements
+				for web-based software in the Debian
+				GNU/Linux distribution.
 			<p>
-				Each package that provides an application available through a web interface is
-				supposed to be compliant with this policy manual.
+				Web-based software encompasses the group
+				of software packages which are designed to
+				be accessed via the Hyper Text Transfer
+				Protocol (HTTP) and similar client/server based
+				content distribution protocols.  This
+				includes web servers, and applications
+				which are designed to run on top of
+				such servers.
 		<sect id="about-authors">Authors and Maintainers
 			<p>
-				This policy manual has been written by the members of the Debian Webapps Team:
+				This policy manual has been written by
+				the members of the Debian Webapps Team:
 			<p>
 				<list>
 	  			<item>Alexis Sukrieh
@@ -59,8 +59,6 @@
   				<item>Neil McGovern
   				<item>Sean Finney
 				</list>
-			<p>
-				<em>FIXME: add here your name ;)</em>
 			<p>
 				While the authors of this document have tried hard to avoid typos and other
 				errors, these do still occur. If you discover an error in this manual or if you