[Debconf6-data-commit] r49 - mail

[Neil McGovern]

Author: neilm
Date: 2005-11-06 23:17:18 +0000 (Sun, 06 Nov 2005)
New Revision: 49

Modified:
   mail/d-d-a_generic-sponsorship-offer
Log:
More modifications


Modified: mail/d-d-a_generic-sponsorship-offer
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--- mail/d-d-a_generic-sponsorship-offer	2005-11-06 23:15:23 UTC (rev 48)
+++ mail/d-d-a_generic-sponsorship-offer	2005-11-06 23:17:18 UTC (rev 49)
@@ -11,10 +11,10 @@
 tell us as early as possible. This is done so that we might take advance of
 the cheaper flight prices and special offers that can be found.
 
-Are you interested in attending DebConf6, but can't afford the entire trip? Are
-you working on any aspect of Debian?  Then please register at
-http://debconf.org/debconf6/register and make sure you check the "I need travel
-support!" box.
+Are you interested in attending DebConf6, but can't afford the entire trip?
+Are you working on any aspect of Debian?
+If so, please register at http://debconf.org/debconf6/register and make sure
+you check the "I need travel support!" box.
 
 Please ensure you specify:
 - the area you work on within Debian