[SCM] live-manual branch, debian, updated. debian/2.0_a12-1-68-gf33a654

Ben Armstrong synrg at debian.org
Sun Dec 12 18:07:36 UTC 2010


The following commit has been merged in the debian branch:
commit 5a6154275c6a060f16e53d9ca6a6a9acef3ed259
Author: Ben Armstrong <synrg at debian.org>
Date:   Sun Dec 12 14:04:47 2010 -0400

    Fixing missing link to Persistence section.

diff --git a/manual/en/user_basics.ssi b/manual/en/user_basics.ssi
index abdc69e..49d784d 100644
--- a/manual/en/user_basics.ssi
+++ b/manual/en/user_basics.ssi
@@ -14,9 +14,7 @@ _* *{Linux kernel image}*, usually named #{vmlinuz*}#
 
 _* *{Initial RAM disk image (initrd)}*: a RAM disk set up for the Linux boot, containing modules possibly needed to mount the System image and some scripts to do it.
 
-_* *{System image}*: The operating system's filesystem image. Usually, a SquashFS compressed filesystem is used to minimize the Debian Live image size. Note that it is read-only. So, during boot the Debian Live system will use a RAM disk and 'union' mechanism to enable writing files within the running system. However, all modifications will be lost upon shutdown unless optional persistence is used (see persistence).
-
-% FIXME: <xref linkend="persistence"/>
+_* *{System image}*: The operating system's filesystem image. Usually, a SquashFS compressed filesystem is used to minimize the Debian Live image size. Note that it is read-only. So, during boot the Debian Live system will use a RAM disk and 'union' mechanism to enable writing files within the running system. However, all modifications will be lost upon shutdown unless optional persistence is used (see {Persistence}#persistence).
 
 _* *{Bootloader}*: A small piece of code crafted to boot from the chosen media, possibly presenting a prompt or menu to allow selection of options/configuration. It loads the Linux kernel and its initrd to run with an associated system filesystem. Different solutions can be used, depending on the target media and format of the filesystem containing the previously mentioned components: isolinux to boot from a CD or DVD in ISO9660 format, syslinux for HDD or USB drive booting from a VFAT partition, extlinux for ext2/3/4 and btrfs partitions, pxelinux for PXE netboot, GRUB for ext2/3/4 partitions, etc.
 
@@ -216,7 +214,7 @@ We must configure our network's DHCP server to be sure to give an IP address to
 
 Here is an example for inspiration, written for the ISC DHCP server #{isc-dhcp-server}# in the /etc/dhcp/dhcpd.conf configuration file;
 
-% FIXME
+% FIXME: bring up to date: base example on default isc-dhcp-server config file in Squeeze
 
 code{
 
diff --git a/manual/en/user_customization-runtime.ssi b/manual/en/user_customization-runtime.ssi
index fb19968..8041280 100644
--- a/manual/en/user_customization-runtime.ssi
+++ b/manual/en/user_customization-runtime.ssi
@@ -68,7 +68,7 @@ lb config --bootappend-live "locales=fr_FR.UTF-8 keyboard-layouts=fr keyboard-va
 
 }code
 
-2~ Persistence
+2~persistence Persistence
 
 A live cd paradigm is a pre-installed system which runs from read-only media, like a cdrom, where writes and modifications do not survive reboots of the host hardware which runs it.
 

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