[SCM] live-manual branch, debian-next, updated. debian/3.0_a15-1-41-g9b21089

[chals]

The following commit has been merged in the debian-next branch:
commit 9b21089a20680d995fbf1505de85d4ab317f9b28
Author: chals <chals at altorricon.com>
Date:   Mon Sep 10 15:43:45 2012 +0200

    Editing the changes to the persistence section, thanks to Ben Armstrong.

diff --git a/manual/en/user_customization-runtime.ssi b/manual/en/user_customization-runtime.ssi
index 1acd1c1..a1d999e 100644
--- a/manual/en/user_customization-runtime.ssi
+++ b/manual/en/user_customization-runtime.ssi
@@ -143,9 +143,7 @@ code{
 
 }code
 
-Then copy the #{persistence}# file to the root of a writable partition. Mount it and create the #{live-persistence.conf}# file *{inside}* the image file.
-
-Imagine you have created your image file in your home directory with an ext4 filesystem. You can copy it to the root of your hard drive's filesystem under #{/persistence}# and mount it in #{/mnt}#, then, if you want to make #{/usr}# persistent but you only want to save the changes you make to that directory and not all the contents of #{/usr}# you can use the "union" option. You can proceed as follows:
+Once the image file is created, in order to make #{/usr}# persistent but only saving the changes you make to that directory and not all the contents of #{/usr}# you can use the "union" option. If the image file is located in your home directory, copy it to the root of your hard drive's filesystem and mount it in #{/mnt}# as follows:
 
 code{
 
@@ -156,7 +154,7 @@ code{
 
 }code
 
-You can now reboot and boot your live media with the boot parameter "persistence".
+Reboot into your live media with the boot parameter "persistence".
 
 3~live-persistence-conf The live-persistence.conf file
 

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