[SCM] live-manual branch, debian-next, updated. debian/3.0_a15-1-42-ga21d9e1

[chals]

The following commit has been merged in the debian-next branch:
commit a21d9e11469df23a8f646d86108641b883925cc0
Author: chals <chals at altorricon.com>
Date:   Mon Sep 10 21:53:58 2012 +0200

    Rereading the persistence image file use example clarifying that it is just an example.

diff --git a/manual/en/user_customization-runtime.ssi b/manual/en/user_customization-runtime.ssi
index a1d999e..625628b 100644
--- a/manual/en/user_customization-runtime.ssi
+++ b/manual/en/user_customization-runtime.ssi
@@ -134,7 +134,7 @@ code{
 
 }code
 
-Here's an example of how to create an ext4-based image file used for persistence:
+Here's an example of how to create an ext4-based image file to be used for persistence:
 
 code{
 
@@ -143,7 +143,7 @@ code{
 
 }code
 
-Once the image file is created, in order to make #{/usr}# persistent but only saving the changes you make to that directory and not all the contents of #{/usr}# you can use the "union" option. If the image file is located in your home directory, copy it to the root of your hard drive's filesystem and mount it in #{/mnt}# as follows:
+Once the image file is created, as an example, to make #{/usr}# persistent but only saving the changes you make to that directory and not all the contents of #{/usr}#, you can use the "union" option. If the image file is located in your home directory, copy it to the root of your hard drive's filesystem and mount it in #{/mnt}# as follows:
 
 code{
 

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