Korrekturen an debtags-Vorlage

[Frank Lichtenheld]

Hi Helge,

please direct corrections to the debtags vocabulary to
debtags-devel at lists.alioth.debian.org (CCed), packages.debian.org
will pick them up once the published vocabulary is fixed.

On Fri, May 02, 2008 at 08:30:46PM +0200, Helge Kreutzmann wrote:
> -" Network News Transfer Protocol, a protocol for reading in writing Usenet\n"
> +" Network News Transfer Protocol, a protocol for reading and writing Usenet\n"
> 
> -" among NNTP servers to transfer articles. \n"
> +" among NNTP servers to transfer articles.\n"
> 
> -" predecessor SCP, which only allowed file transfer. It is not, other than "
> +" predecessor SCP, which only allows file transfer. It is not, other than "
> 
> (2x, FTP contains already "protocol")
> -" name might suggest, the a version of the FTP protocol executed through an\n"
> +" name might suggest, a version of FTP executed through an\n"

Gruesse,
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