[Dwn-trans-commit] CVS public_html/src/Writing/DWN

[CVS User joey]

Update of /var/cvs/infodrom.org/public_html/src/Writing/DWN
In directory finlandia:/home/users/joey/Projects/Web/public_html/src/Writing/DWN

Modified Files:
	dwn-2006-31.wml 
Log Message:
Corrections by Jens Seidel

--- /var/cvs/infodrom.org/public_html/src/Writing/DWN/dwn-2006-31.wml	2006/08/02 05:34:50	1.30
+++ /var/cvs/infodrom.org/public_html/src/Writing/DWN/dwn-2006-31.wml	2006/08/02 14:18:40	1.31
@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@
 nine new members of the QA team who already work on outstanding issues in the
 <a href="$(HOME)/releases/etch/">etch</a> release.  Gintautas Miliauskas <a
 href="http://gintasm.blogspot.com/2006/06/localization-coordination-for-debian-1.html">\
-reported</a> that he has been working on an integrated l10n infrastructure for
+reported</a> that he has been working on an integrated localisation infrastructure for
 Debian based on the framework of the <a
 href="http://www.wordforge.org/">WordForge</a> project.</p>
 
@@ -154,7 +154,7 @@
 <li><a href="http://packages.debian.org/unstable/net/openser">openser</a>
     &mdash; Very fast and configurable SIP proxy.</li>
 <li><a href="http://packages.debian.org/unstable/otherosfs/p3nfs">p3nfs</a>
-    &mdash; Mount the file systems on the Psion/Symbian PDA/Phone.</li>
+    &mdash; Mounts the file systems on the Psion/Symbian PDA/Phone.</li>
 <li><a href="http://packages.debian.org/unstable/utils/pdfcrack">pdfcrack</a>
     &mdash; PDF files password cracker.</li>
 <li><a href="http://packages.debian.org/unstable/web/phpgedview">phpgedview</a>
@@ -228,7 +228,7 @@
 </li>
 <li> ultrapossum &mdash; Multi-functional LDAP Solution
      <br><a href="http://bugs.debian.org/378885">Bug#378885</a>:
-     Request of QA, dead upstream, unmaintained, depends on removed openldap2.2
+     Request of QA, upstream gone, unmaintained, depends on removed openldap2.2
 </li>
 <li> installwatch &mdash; Track installation of local software
      <br><a href="http://bugs.debian.org/347469">Bug#347469</a>:
@@ -240,7 +240,7 @@
 </li>
 <li> kimberlite &mdash; High Availability Clustering Package
      <br><a href="http://bugs.debian.org/348195">Bug#348195</a>:
-     Request of QA, orphaned, unused, dead upstream
+     Request of QA, orphaned, unused, upstream gone
 </li>
 <li> mozilla-firefox-locale-it &mdash; Mozilla Firefox Italian Language/Region Package
      <br><a href="http://bugs.debian.org/348357">Bug#348357</a>:
@@ -272,7 +272,7 @@
 </li>
 <li> fisg &mdash; Fast IRC Statistics Generator
      <br><a href="http://bugs.debian.org/378910">Bug#378910</a>:
-     Request of maintainer, dead upstream
+     Request of maintainer, upstream gone
 </li>
 <li> parted-swig &mdash; Perl5 bindings for libparted
      <br><a href="http://bugs.debian.org/379293">Bug#379293</a>: