[Dwn-trans-commit] CVS public_html/src/Writing/DWN

[CVS User joey]

Update of /var/cvs/infodrom.org/public_html/src/Writing/DWN
In directory finlandia:/home/users/joey/Projects/Web/public_html/src/Writing/DWN

Modified Files:
	dwn-2006-32.wml 
Log Message:
Polishing

--- /var/cvs/infodrom.org/public_html/src/Writing/DWN/dwn-2006-32.wml	2006/08/07 06:11:26	1.28
+++ /var/cvs/infodrom.org/public_html/src/Writing/DWN/dwn-2006-32.wml	2006/08/07 06:11:47	1.29
@@ -83,14 +83,15 @@
 
 # From: Sebastian Feltel <sebastian at feltel.de>
 
-<p><strong>Hosting for Debian-related mailing lists.</strong> Pascal Hakim <a
-href="http://www.redellipse.net/stuff/Debian/teams.debian.net.story">informed</a>
-that he has started <a href="http://teams.debian.net/">teams.debian.net</a>
-which is about providing space for
+<p><strong>Hosting for Debian-related Mailing Lists.</strong> Pascal Hakim <a
+href="http://www.redellipse.net/stuff/Debian/teams.debian.net.story">reported</a>
+that he has set up <a href="http://teams.debian.net/">teams.debian.net</a>
+which aims at providing space for
 Debian-related mailing lists and archives, including package lists,
-local user groups or mailing lists for special events. The service could
+user groups lists oand mailing lists for special events.  The service could
 also act as a temporary server for testing new mailing lists before
-making them official on lists.debian.org. Pascal created a set of <a
+making them official on <a href="http://lists.debian.org/">\
+lists.debian.org</a>.  Pascal created a set of <a 
 href="http://teams.debian.net/request.html">rules</a>
 for using his service.</p>