[Dwn-trans-commit] CVS public_html/src/Writing/DWN

[CVS User joey]

Update of /var/cvs/infodrom.org/public_html/src/Writing/DWN
In directory finlandia:/home/users/joey/Projects/Web/public_html/src/Writing/DWN

Modified Files:
	dwn-2006-34.wml 
Log Message:
A bit of polishing

--- /var/cvs/infodrom.org/public_html/src/Writing/DWN/dwn-2006-34.wml	2006/08/16 11:17:24	1.3
+++ /var/cvs/infodrom.org/public_html/src/Writing/DWN/dwn-2006-34.wml	2006/08/16 11:17:45	1.4
@@ -7,18 +7,17 @@
 
 # From: Sebastian Feltel <sebastian at feltel.de>
 
-<p><strong>Coordination of events in German-speaking area.</strong> Meike
-Reichle <a
-href="http://lists.debian.org/debian-events-eu/2006/08/msg00019.html">\
-informed</a> that there is a new Wiki <a
-href="http://wiki.debian.org/DebianEventsDe">page</a> for coordinating public
-events
-like fairs and exebitions in the German-speaking area where the Debian
-projects attends.  The page was created as a result of a <a
+<p><strong>Event Coordination in the German-speaking Area.</strong> Meike
+Reichle <a href="http://lists.debian.org/debian-events-eu/2006/08/msg00019.html">\
+announced</a> a new Wiki <a href="http://wiki.debian.org/DebianEventsDe">\
+page</a> for coordinating public events in the German-speaking area such as
+fairs, exhiitions and conferences in which the Debian projects participates.
+This is one result of a <a
 href="http://lists.debian.org/debian-publicity/2006/08/msg00031.html">meeting</a>
-where the event organisers within Debian came together.  The goal is also
-to re-create the events <a href="$(HOME)/events/">section</a> of the Debian
-website in the near future.</p>
+of Debian event organisers last weekend.  Alexander Schmehl <a
+href="http://lists.debian.org/debian-events-eu/2006/08/msg00022.html">added</a>
+that the events <a href="$(HOME)/events/">section</a> on the Debian website
+will be overhauled in the near future.</p>
 
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