[Dwn-trans-commit] CVS public_html/src/Writing/DWN

[CVS User joey]

Update of /var/cvs/infodrom.org/public_html/src/Writing/DWN
In directory finlandia:/home/users/joey/Projects/Web/public_html/src/Writing/DWN

Modified Files:
	dwn-2006-34.wml 
Log Message:
Polishing

--- /var/cvs/infodrom.org/public_html/src/Writing/DWN/dwn-2006-34.wml	2006/08/16 14:04:04	1.10
+++ /var/cvs/infodrom.org/public_html/src/Writing/DWN/dwn-2006-34.wml	2006/08/16 16:12:23	1.11
@@ -58,9 +58,9 @@
 href="http://packages.debian.org/unstable/gnome/update-notifier">\
 update-notifier</a>. This tool, that was initially made by Ubuntu, puts
 a notification icon in the notification area and warns the user about
-updates being available. This version of the Debian package brings a
-"reboot required" (for critical packages only) and a "Debian CD
-insertion" detection notification. Such features should contribute to
+updates being available. This version of the Debian package notifies about
+reboot requirements for critical packages only and informs about Debian
+CDs/DVDs inserted in the drive. Such features should contribute to
 make Debian a nicer desktop distribution.</p>
 
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