[Dwn-trans-commit] CVS public_html/src/Writing/DWN

[CVS User joey]

Update of /var/cvs/infodrom.org/public_html/src/Writing/DWN
In directory finlandia:/home/users/joey/Projects/Web/public_html/src/Writing/DWN

Modified Files:
	dwn-2006-34.wml 
Log Message:
Corrections by Helge Kreutzmann

--- /var/cvs/infodrom.org/public_html/src/Writing/DWN/dwn-2006-34.wml	2006/08/18 17:39:25	1.16
+++ /var/cvs/infodrom.org/public_html/src/Writing/DWN/dwn-2006-34.wml	2006/08/19 13:01:49	1.17
@@ -16,7 +16,7 @@
 Reichle <a href="http://lists.debian.org/debian-events-eu/2006/08/msg00019.html">\
 announced</a> a new Wiki <a href="http://wiki.debian.org/DebianEventsDe">\
 page</a> for coordinating public events in the German-speaking area such as
-fairs, exhiitions and conferences in which the Debian projects participates.
+fairs, exhibitions and conferences in which the Debian projects participates.
 This is one result of a <a
 href="http://lists.debian.org/debian-publicity/2006/08/msg00031.html">meeting</a>
 of Debian event organisers last weekend.  Alexander Schmehl <a
@@ -41,14 +41,14 @@
 As part of his research on Debian, Martin Krafft <a
 href="http://lists.debian.org/debian-devel/2006/07/msg01358.html">\
 asked</a> about the tools that have been successfully adopted
-or which have been rejected by the developers. Michael Banck <a
+or those that have been rejected by the developers. Michael Banck <a
 href="http://lists.debian.org/debian-devel/2006/07/msg01360.html">\
-mentionned</a> <a href="http://packages.debian.org/unstable/devel/cdbs">\
+mentioned</a> <a href="http://packages.debian.org/unstable/devel/cdbs">\
 CDBS</a>, <a href="http://alioth.debian.org">Alioth</a> and Debian's
 <a href="http://svn.debian.org">Subversion repository</a>, but <a
 href="http://packages.debian.org/unstable/devel/debhelper">Debhelper</a>,
 patch management systems and distributed version control systems have
-also been widely adopted. Debian Developers also appreciated the <a
+also been widely adopted. Debian Developers also appreciated <a
 href="http://packages.debian.org/unstable/devel/devscripts">\
 devscripts</a> and package checkers like <a
 href="http://packages.debian.org/unstable/devel/lintian">lintian</a>,
@@ -63,17 +63,17 @@
 href="http://packages.debian.org/unstable/gnome/update-notifier">\
 update-notifier</a>. This tool, that was initially made by Ubuntu, puts
 a notification icon in the notification area and warns the user about
-updates being available. This version of the Debian package notifies about
+updates being available. The version of the Debian package notifies about
 reboot requirements for critical packages only and informs about Debian
 CDs/DVDs inserted in the drive. Such features should contribute to
 make Debian a nicer desktop distribution.</p>
 
 <p><strong>Publicity for Debian Events.</strong> Joey Schulze <a
 href="http://lists.debian.org/debian-events-eu/2006/08/msg00000.html">\
-asked</a> to emphasise on events a bit more again.  He suggested also more
+asked</a> to emphasise events a bit more again.  He suggested also more
 talks and workshops with a Debian background and more promotion.  This would
 generate more interest by users to meet Debian people at exhibitions and
-conferences and would give developers a better chances to talk to users in
+conferences and would give developers a better chance to talk to users in
 person.  It would also be nice if a <a
 href="$(HOME)/events/2005/0203-solutionslinux-report">report</a> would be
 written after the event.</p>
@@ -83,7 +83,7 @@
 reported</a> that the <a href="http://alioth.debian.org/">Alioth</a> host
 costa now supports both git and bzr for hosting source archives.  He added an
 explanation how to use both systems to access the repositories.  User
-replication also has been improved so that the downtime drops from 15 minutes
+replication has also been improved so that the downtime drops from 15 minutes
 to only a few seconds.</p>
 
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