[Dwn-trans-commit] CVS public_html/src/Writing/DWN

[CVS User joey]

Update of /var/cvs/infodrom.org/public_html/src/Writing/DWN
In directory finlandia:/home/users/joey/Projects/Web/public_html/src/Writing/DWN

Modified Files:
	dwn-2006-41.wml 
Log Message:
Polishing

--- /var/cvs/infodrom.org/public_html/src/Writing/DWN/dwn-2006-41.wml	2006/11/18 18:02:23	1.15
+++ /var/cvs/infodrom.org/public_html/src/Writing/DWN/dwn-2006-41.wml	2006/11/18 18:27:56	1.16
@@ -65,18 +65,16 @@
 href="https://penta.debconf.org/user">attendees</a> and for submitting
 proposals.</p>
 
-<p><strong>Etch release update.</strong> Steve Langasek <a
+<p><strong>Etch Release Update.</strong> Steve Langasek <a
 href="http://lists.debian.org/debian-devel-announce/2006/11/msg00004.html">\
-summarised</a> informations regarding the <a
-href="$(HOME)/releases/etch">Etch</a> release in an email to the <a
-href="http://lists.debian.org/debian-devel-announce">debian-devel-announce</a>
-mailing list. He states that the stabilisation phase of Etch is about
-three month behind former expectations and due to this fact the
-prospected release date of December, 4th could not be held. Apart from
-that Etch is in good shape, almost all release goals were met or in the
-process of being met and the counter of <a
-href="http://bugs.debian.org/release-critical">release critical bugs</a>
-is continuous going down.</p>
+stated</a> that the stabilisation phase of <a
+href="$(HOME)/releases/etch/">etch</a> is about
+three months behind former expectations and due to this fact the
+prospected release date of December, 4th could not be met anymore.  Apart from
+that the distribution is in good shape, almost all release goals ar met or in the
+process of being met and the number of release critical <a
+href="http://bugs.debian.org/release-critical">bugs</a>
+is continuously going down.</p>
 
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