[Dwn-trans-commit] CVS public_html/src/Writing/DWN

[CVS User joey]

Update of /var/cvs/infodrom.org/public_html/src/Writing/DWN
In directory finlandia:/home/users/joey/Projects/Web/public_html/src/Writing/DWN

Modified Files:
	dwn-2007-03.wml 
Log Message:
Final tweaks

--- /var/cvs/infodrom.org/public_html/src/Writing/DWN/dwn-2007-03.wml	2007/02/13 08:08:18	1.31
+++ /var/cvs/infodrom.org/public_html/src/Writing/DWN/dwn-2007-03.wml	2007/02/13 20:52:01	1.32
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 #include <joey.style>
 
-<page title="Debian Weekly News #3 -- unreleased">
+<page title="Debian Weekly News #3 -- February 13th, 2007">
 
 <p>Welcome to this year's 3rd issue of DWN, the weekly newsletter for the
 Debian community.  In light of recent <a
@@ -30,7 +30,7 @@
 href="http://lists.debian.org/debian-devel-announce/2006/12/msg00010.html">\
 announced</a> new fields in the Debian LDAP schema: Date of birth (developer-only
 visible), Gender (world visible), and several fields to allow the developer
-to disable their @debian.org email address, specify a whitelist, enable
+to disable their @debian.org email address, specify a white-list, enable
 greylisting and sender verification callouts or specify RBL and RHSBL lists to
 be checked at SMTP time.  Jörg Jaspert <a
 href="http://lists.debian.org/debian-devel-announce/2006/12/msg00011.html">\
@@ -44,7 +44,7 @@
 href="http://lists.debian.org/debian-events-eu/2007/01/msg00029.html">\
 announced</a> the schedule for talks in the Debian <a
 href="http://fosdem.org/2007/schedule/devroom/debian">developers room</a> at
-the this years' <a href="$(HOME)/events/0224-fosdem">FOSDEM</a> taking place from
+the this years' <a href="$(HOME)/events/20070224-fosdem">FOSDEM</a> taking place from
 February, 24th to 25th in Brussels, Belgium. Debian developers will also
 maintain a booth. Interested supporters should
 contact Wouter Verhelst by <a
@@ -54,10 +54,10 @@
 Rodney Gedda Sydney <a
 href="http://computerworld.co.nz/news.nsf/news/072965C09248DA04CC257268000C6C7F">\
 reported</a> that New Zealands <a href="http://www.elections.org.nz/">\
-electronic election enrollment system</a>
+electronic election enrolment system</a>
 is powered by Debian GNU/Linux.  The system consists of two clusters of
 PostgreSQL databases in different locations that replace the former
-system of decentralised Oracle databases with VisualBasic frontends. The
+system of decentralised Oracle databases with Visual Basic front-ends. The
 new system also increases voting participation by automatically
 informing eligible voters about ongoing votes.</p>
 
@@ -93,14 +93,14 @@
 and BladeSystem file and application servers. Debian is also available
 pre-installed and configured on several product series.</p>
 
-<p><strong>Call for Project Leader Nominations.</<strong> Manoj Srivastava,
+<p><strong>Call for Project Leader Nominations.</strong> Manoj Srivastava,
 secretary of the Debian project, <a
 href="http://lists.debian.org/debian-vote/2007/02/msg00001.html">\
 called</a> for nominations for the upcoming  <a
 href="$(HOME)/devel/leader">Debian Project Leader</a> election.
 Prospective candidates are asked to send in their platforms and letters
 of application to the project secretary in time, so they can be
-published on the <a href= "http://www.debian.org/vote/2007/vote_001">\
+published on the <a href= "$(HOME)/vote/2007/vote_001">\
 voting page</a>. The term of the new Debian Project Leader will start in
 April 2007.</p>
 
@@ -109,7 +109,7 @@
 announced</a> that he has set-up an autobuilder for the <a
 href="http://wiki.debian.org/DebianLive/">Debian Live</a> system.  This
 is a live version of Debian GNU/Linux that doesn't need to be installed on a
-harddisk.  The system is available with different desktop environments like <a
+hard disk.  The system is available with different desktop environments like <a
 href="http://www.gnome.org/">GNOME</a>, <a href="http://www.kde.org/">KDE</a>
 and <a href="http://www.xfce.org/">Xfce</a>.
 Builds based on <a href="$(HOME)/releases/testing/">testing</a> are
@@ -135,7 +135,7 @@
 tested the package installation process and the second run checked
 installation and removal of packages.  Lucas proposed to find common sense
 before filling bugs with respect to the <a
-href="http://people.debian.org/~lucas/logs/2007/01/16/">logfiles</a>.  
+href="http://people.debian.org/~lucas/logs/2007/01/16/">log files</a>.  
 For easier processing Stefano Sacchiroli <a
 href="http://lists.debian.org/debian-release/2007/01/msg00856.html">asked</a>
 for a list sorted by maintainer, which Loic Minner <a
@@ -214,7 +214,7 @@
 <li><a href="http://packages.debian.org/unstable/science/sibsim4">sibsim4</a>
     &mdash; Align expressed RNA sequences on a DNA template.</li>
 <li><a href="http://packages.debian.org/unstable/admin/sshm">sshm</a>
-    &mdash; Commandline tool to manage your ssh servers.</li>
+    &mdash; Command-line tool to manage your SSH servers.</li>
 <li><a href="http://packages.debian.org/unstable/devel/viewvc">viewvc</a>
     &mdash; View CVS/SVN repositories via HTTP.</li>
 <li><a href="http://packages.debian.org/unstable/web/wfo">wfo</a>