[Dwn-trans-commit] CVS public_html/src/Writing/DWN

[CVS User joey]

Update of /var/cvs/infodrom.org/public_html/src/Writing/DWN
In directory finlandia:/home/users/joey/Projects/Web/public_html/src/Writing/DWN

Modified Files:
	dwn-2007-01.wml 
Log Message:
Polishing

--- /var/cvs/infodrom.org/public_html/src/Writing/DWN/dwn-2007-01.wml	2007/01/23 09:13:54	1.22
+++ /var/cvs/infodrom.org/public_html/src/Writing/DWN/dwn-2007-01.wml	2007/01/23 09:35:36	1.23
@@ -112,7 +112,7 @@
 stability, <code>apt-get</code> and a very helpful large community
 he is using the system and expects it to stay at No 1.</p>
 
-<p><strong>Abandoning stable Releases?</strong> Joseph Smidt <a
+<p><strong>Abandon stable Releases?</strong> Joseph Smidt <a
 href="http://lists.debian.org/debian-devel/2006/09/msg00269.html">suggested</a>
 to only support unstable and testing so that maintaining is less stress and
 the testing distribution becomes even better.  Several developers <a
@@ -128,15 +128,17 @@
 
 <p><strong>Compatibility between Creative Commons 2.5 and Debian.</strong>  Luis
 Matos <a href="http://lists.debian.org/debian-legal/2007/01/msg00020.html">\
-sent</a> a message to <a href="http://lists.debian.org/debian-legal">\
-debian-legal</a> looking for some feedback about the compatibility between the
-Creative Commons 2.5 and Debian. Andrew Donnellan <a
-href="http://lists.debian.org/debian-legal/2007/01/msg00021.html">poited</a>
-that at this moment none of the Creative Common licenses 2.5 are DFSG
-compatible and there is a chance that some of the licenses of version 3.0
-would be DFSG compatible thanks to the effort of Debian people. Francesco Poli
+asked</a> for feedback about the compatibility between <a
+href="http://www.creativecommons.org/">Creative Commons</a> 2.5 licenses and
+Debian. Andrew Donnellan <a
+href="http://lists.debian.org/debian-legal/2007/01/msg00021.html">pointed out</a> 
+that at this moment none of the Creative Common licenses are
+compatible with the <a href="$(HOME)/social_contract#guidelines">Debian Free
+Software Guidelines</a> (DFSG).  However, some of the licenses of version 3.0
+will most likely be compatible with the DFSG thanks to the effort of Debian
+people.  Francesco Poli
 <a href="http://lists.debian.org/debian-legal/2007/01/msg00022.html">\
-reported</a> that the current drafts are not DFSG-free.</p>
+added</a> that the current drafts are not DFSG-free, though.</p>
 
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