[Dwn-trans-commit] CVS public_html/src/Writing/DWN

[CVS User joey]

Update of /var/cvs/infodrom.org/public_html/src/Writing/DWN
In directory finlandia:/home/users/joey/Projects/Web/public_html/src/Writing/DWN

Modified Files:
	dwn-2007-02.wml 
Log Message:
Polishing

--- /var/cvs/infodrom.org/public_html/src/Writing/DWN/dwn-2007-02.wml	2007/01/27 08:07:34	1.5
+++ /var/cvs/infodrom.org/public_html/src/Writing/DWN/dwn-2007-02.wml	2007/01/27 08:10:45	1.6
@@ -30,15 +30,15 @@
 
 # From: Felipe Augusto van de Wiel <felipe at cathedrallabs.org>
 
-<p><strong>Request for translation updates.</strong>  Javier Fernández-Sanguino
+<p><strong>Request for Translation Updates.</strong>  Javier Fernández-Sanguino
 Peña <a
 href="http://lists.debian.org/debian-devel-announce/2007/01/msg00002.html">\
 asked</a> maintainers to take the chance to upload packages with only
-translation updates, such modification have a great chance to granted a freeze
-expection by the Release Team.  Even after the <a
+translation updates.  Such modification have a good chance to be granted a freeze
+expection by the release team.  Even after the <a
 href="http://people.debian.org/~lwall/i18n/nmu/">NMU Campaign</a> aimed to
-fix pending <a href="http://people.debian.org/~lwall/i18n/>l10n bugs</a> in
-<a href="http://bugs.debian.org>Debian BTS</a>, there are still many packages
+fix pending <a href="http://people.debian.org/~lwall/i18n/">localisation bugs</a> in
+the <a href="http://bugs.debian.org/">bug tracking system</a>, there are still many packages
 with open bugs.  Maintainers are encouraged to sent a message to <a
 href="http://lists.debian.org/debian-i18n">debian-i18n</a> asking for
 translation updates.</p>