[Dwn-trans-commit] CVS public_html/src/Writing/DWN

[CVS User joey]

Update of /var/cvs/infodrom.org/public_html/src/Writing/DWN
In directory finlandia:/home/users/joey/Projects/Web/public_html/src/Writing/DWN

Modified Files:
	dwn-2007-04.wml 
Log Message:
Corrections by Jens Seidel

--- /var/cvs/infodrom.org/public_html/src/Writing/DWN/dwn-2007-04.wml	2007/03/13 07:16:56	1.40
+++ /var/cvs/infodrom.org/public_html/src/Writing/DWN/dwn-2007-04.wml	2007/03/13 18:06:32	1.41
@@ -5,9 +5,10 @@
 # From: Felipe Augusto van de Wiel <felipe at cathedrallabs.org>
 
 <p>Welcome to this year's 4th issue of DWN, the newsletter for the
-Debian community.  The Debian listmaster spring cleaning effort <a
+Debian community.  The Debian listmasters <a
 href="http://lists.debian.org/debian-project/2007/01/msg00046.html">\
-determined</a> several unused and obsolete lists that will be closed down.
+determined</a> as part of the spring cleaning effort several
+unused and obsolete lists that will be closed down.
 Tony Mobily <a href="http://www.freesoftwaremagazine.com/node/1772">\
 noted</a> that the last <a href="http://www.gnu.org/philosophy/gif.html">\
 GIF</a> patent has finally expired.  Gustavo Franco <a
@@ -121,7 +122,7 @@
 logging</a> of automatic package builds together with build effort
 coordination caused binary-only uploads to be denied for several architectures
 and suites.  Emulated or cross-compiled package builds are still considered
-potentially harmful and thus not encouraged.  He added implementation details
+potentially harmful and are thus not encouraged.  He added implementation details
 and illustrated the events that lead to these restrictions.</p>
 
 <p><strong>Closing unreproducible Bugs.</strong>  Julien Valroff
@@ -131,7 +132,7 @@
 href="http://lists.debian.org/debian-mentors/2007/01/msg00568.html">added</a>
 that it should be taken into account whether the submitter is responsive and
 whether the bug report includes sufficient information.  He asserted that the
-unreproducible tag has a similar meaning as <code>moreinfo</code>, i.e. the report should
+<code>unreproducible</code> tag has a similar meaning as <code>moreinfo</code>, i.e. the report should
 stay open, especially if it indicates a crash.</p>
 
 # From: Sebastian Feltel <sebastian at feltel.de> (3x)