[Dwn-trans-commit] CVS public_html/src/Writing/DWN

[CVS User joey]

Update of /var/cvs/infodrom.org/public_html/src/Writing/DWN
In directory finlandia:/home/users/joey/Projects/Web/public_html/src/Writing/DWN

Modified Files:
	dwn-2007-03.wml 
Log Message:
Corrections by Jens Seidel

--- /var/cvs/infodrom.org/public_html/src/Writing/DWN/dwn-2007-03.wml	2007/02/14 09:48:41	1.35
+++ /var/cvs/infodrom.org/public_html/src/Writing/DWN/dwn-2007-03.wml	2007/03/13 18:19:03	1.36
@@ -29,9 +29,9 @@
 <p><strong>LDAP and Infrastructure Updates.</strong>  Ryan Murray <a
 href="http://lists.debian.org/debian-devel-announce/2006/12/msg00010.html">\
 announced</a> new fields in the Debian LDAP schema: Date of birth (developer-only
-visible), Gender (world visible), and several fields to allow the developer
+visible), Gender (world visible), and several fields to allow developer
 to disable their @debian.org email address, specify a white-list, enable
-greylisting and sender verification callouts or specify RBL and RHSBL lists to
+greylisting and sender verification callouts or specify RBL and RHSBL to
 be checked at SMTP time.  Jörg Jaspert <a
 href="http://lists.debian.org/debian-devel-announce/2006/12/msg00011.html">\
 added</a> some important points about fields available via the mail gateway
@@ -100,7 +100,7 @@
 href="$(HOME)/devel/leader">Debian Project Leader</a> election.
 Prospective candidates are asked to send in their platforms and letters
 of application to the project secretary in time, so they can be
-published on the <a href= "$(HOME)/vote/2007/vote_001">\
+published on the <a href="$(HOME)/vote/2007/vote_001">\
 voting page</a>. The term of the new Debian Project Leader will start in
 April 2007.</p>
 
@@ -118,12 +118,12 @@
 
 # Felipe Augusto van de Wiel <felipe at cathedrallabs.org> (3x)
 
-<p><strong>First Test Report on Multiarch DVD.</strong>  Giuseppe Sacco <a
+<p><strong>First Test Report on Multiarch DVDs.</strong>  Giuseppe Sacco <a
 href="http://lists.debian.org/debian-cd/2007/01/msg00062.html">reported</a> his
-impressions about the use of multiarch DVD.  He wondered what should be done in
+impressions about the use of multiarch DVDs.  He wondered what should be done in
 order to start the amd64 kernel instead of i386, Steve McIntyre <a
 href="http://lists.debian.org/debian-cd/2007/01/msg00067.html">explained</a>
-that i386 is default and prepending <q>amd64-</q> would do the trick.  Giuseppe
+that i386 is the default and prepending <q>amd64-</q> would do the trick.  Giuseppe
 also commented about a few documentation mistakes, Frans Pop <a
 href="http://lists.debian.org/debian-cd/2007/01/msg00063.html">confirmed</a>
 that they are already fixed.</p>
@@ -147,12 +147,12 @@
 Anthony Towns <a href="http://lists.debian.org/debian-devel/2007/01/msg00568.html">\
 responded</a> that a special Debian GNU/Linux 4.0 signing <a
 href="http://ftp-master.debian.org/archive-key-4.0.asc">key</a> is used
-instead and expected to be valid until some time after upcoming stable release.</p>
+instead and is expected to be valid until some time after upcoming stable release.</p>
 
 # From: Frédéric Bothamy <frederic.bothamy at free.fr>
 
 <p><strong>Updates for Debian Sarge.</strong>  Martin Zobel-Helas <a
-href="http://lists.debian.org/debian-release/2007/02/msg00315.html">announced</a>
+href="http://lists.debian.org/debian-release/2007/02/msg00315.html">explained</a>
 the <a href="http://release.debian.org/stable/3.1/3.1r5/">preparations</a>
 done for the next stable update, 3.1r5.  It will include updated versions for Glibc,
 kernel 2.4 and 2.6, Mozilla, OpenOffice.org and XFree86 among others.  Most
@@ -166,7 +166,7 @@
 announced</a> that the annual Debian Conference for 2008 will take place in
 the city of <a href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Mar_del_Plata">Mar del
 Plata</a>, Argentina.  The conference will probably held during the second and
-third weeks  of August, 2008, which means that this will be the first DebConf
+third week of August, 2008, which means that this will be the first DebConf
 to take place in winter.</p>
 
 <p><strong>Security Updates.</strong> You know the drill.  Please make sure
@@ -196,7 +196,7 @@
 <li><a href="http://packages.debian.org/unstable/web/buxon">buxon</a>
     &mdash; SIOC forums browser.</li>
 <li><a href="http://packages.debian.org/unstable/utils/cd5">cd5</a>
-    &mdash; Compute checksum of individual track on CD-ROMS.</li>
+    &mdash; Compute checksum of individual track on CD-ROMs.</li>
 <li><a href="http://packages.debian.org/unstable/x11/fbxkb">fbxkb</a>
     &mdash; X11 keyboard indicator and switcher.</li>
 <li><a href="http://packages.debian.org/unstable/net/jd">jd</a>
@@ -208,7 +208,7 @@
 <li><a href="http://packages.debian.org/unstable/graphics/mirage">mirage</a>
     &mdash; Fast and simple GTK+ Image Viewer.</li>
 <li><a href="http://packages.debian.org/unstable/math/model-builder">model-builder</a>
-    &mdash; graphical ODE simulator.</li>
+    &mdash; Graphical ODE simulator.</li>
 <li><a href="http://packages.debian.org/unstable/mail/pilot">pilot</a>
     &mdash; Simple file browser from Alpine, a text-based email client.</li>
 <li><a href="http://packages.debian.org/unstable/science/sibsim4">sibsim4</a>