[Dwn-trans-english] Re: Yay! Preview 2004/14

[Martin Schulze]

Frank Lichtenheld wrote:
> > <p><strong>Snapshot Archive is now searchable for Packages.</strong> Fumitoshi
> > Ukai (&#40284;&#39164; &#25991;&#25935;)
> >  <a href="http://lists.debian.org/debian-devel-0403/msg02235.html">\
> > announced</a> that he has implemented a new function to <a
> > href="http://snapshot.debian.net/">snapshot.debian.net</a> to search for
> > packages. This is sure to help people for searching the old versions of
> 
> this is sure? What does that mean?

"Das wird sicherlich vielen Personen bei .. helfen".

Rest: Aye --> Patch


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retrieving revision 1.30
diff -u -r1.30 dwn-2004-14.wml
--- a/dwn-2004-14.wml	6 Apr 2004 06:34:17 -0000	1.30
+++ b/dwn-2004-14.wml	6 Apr 2004 06:41:45 -0000
@@ -28,11 +28,11 @@
 Ukai <a href="http://lists.debian.org/debian-devel-0403/msg02235.html">\
 announced</a> that he has implemented a new function on <a
 href="http://snapshot.debian.net/">snapshot.debian.net</a> to search for
-packages. This is sure to help people in searching for old versions of a
+packages.  This is sure to help many people in searching for old versions of a
 particular package from the huge archive.  He has also created a shortcut URL
 of the form <code>http://snapshot.debian.net/package/&lt;packagename&gt;</code>.
 Domenico Andreoli and Branden Robinson thanked him for this great job as well
-as Martin Schulze who suggested he implement such this function.</p>
+as Martin Schulze who suggested he implement such this feature.</p>
 
 <p><strong>Debian Host Naming Scheme.</strong> After Lars Wirzenius <a
 href="http://liw.iki.fi/liw/log/2004-03.html#20040329c">wondered</a> if no-one
@@ -103,7 +103,7 @@
 about a guy who wanted to file a class-action law against the Free Software
 Foundation.  Finally, the <a
 href="http://www.cs.uni-frankfurt.de/~schmehl/grsecurity-first-april.png">defacement</a>
-of their own website by the grsecurity people was a bit awkward and scared
+of their own website by the grsecurity developers was a bit awkward and scared
 quite some people.</p>
 
 # From: Nobuhiro Imai <nov@yo.rim.or.jp>
@@ -165,7 +165,7 @@
 
 <p><strong>Probing for Operating Systems.</strong> Joey Hess <a
 href="http://kitenet.net/~joey/blog/entry/os_probing-2004-04-04-04-40.html">\
-reported</a> that he was working together with Josh Kwan to work on probing
+reported</a> that he was working together with Joshua Kwan to work on probing
 for other operating systems.  This will be used by the <a
 href="$(HOME)/devel/debian-installer/">debian-installer</a> to create the boot
 configuration which should be able to boot other operating systems as

Regards,

	Joey

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