[Pkg-owncloud-commits] [owncloud-doc] 14/49: Bookmarks App revisions for consistency and clarity

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commit b7186cb0f1a6c4bfdc878625365bea68782a340b
Author: ringmaster <epithet at gmail.com>
Date:   Fri Jan 3 12:01:11 2014 -0500

    Bookmarks App revisions for consistency and clarity
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 user_manual/bookmarks.rst | 31 ++++++++++++++++---------------
 1 file changed, 16 insertions(+), 15 deletions(-)

diff --git a/user_manual/bookmarks.rst b/user_manual/bookmarks.rst
index 519c340..d74f096 100644
--- a/user_manual/bookmarks.rst
+++ b/user_manual/bookmarks.rst
@@ -9,26 +9,27 @@ The main interface
 
 Add a bookmark
 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
-In bookmark application, enter a URL into the top-left area of the content section. After adding an address, you can click on pencil button to edit fields for the given address.
+In the bookmark application, enter a URL into the top-left area of the content section. After adding an address, click on the pencil button to edit fields for the given address.
 The main ownCloud bookmark interface contains 3 fields at the top where
-you can enter the website address (or URL), the title of your bookmark and
+you can enter the website address (or URL), the title of your bookmark, and
 a set of tags separated from each other by a space.
 
 .. figure:: images/bookmark_addurl.png
 Adding a bookmark manually
 
-In this example, we have added the page: `http://wikipedia.org` with the title "Wikipedia"
-and some tags describing what Wikipedia is (for an easier search later on).
+In this example, we have added the page `http://wikipedia.org` with the title "Wikipedia"
+and some tags describing what Wikipedia is for an easier search later on.
 
 Edit/Delete a bookmark
 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
 
-You also have the possibility to edit or delete your bookmark.
-For that, just hover on the bookmark and click on the little pencil if you wish to edit the bookmark
-or on the cross if you want to the delete it.
+You also have the possibility to edit or delete a bookmark.
 
-The bookmark will then be filled into the 3 fields at the top of the screen.
-Modify your bookmark to your need then hit the save button to persist the change.
+To edit a bookmark, hover over the bookmark and click on the pencil icon. 
+The bookmark details will then be filled into the 3 fields at the top of the screen.
+Modify your bookmark to your needs then click the save button to persist the change.
+
+To delete a bookmark, hover over the bookmark and click the cross icon.
 
 Search
 ~~~~~~
@@ -42,20 +43,20 @@ Simply click on the "Bookmarks" menu in the sidebar to come back to
 the default view.
 
 
-The bookmarklet
+The Bookmarklet
 ---------------
 
 .. figure:: images/bookmark_setting.png
 Bookmarklet link
 
-The creator of this app understand that people won't come,
-open the ownCloud page to add the bookmark when the see a cool site.
+The creator of this app understands that people won't want to
+open the ownCloud boorkmarks page to add a bookmark every time they see a cool site.
 This is why they have made this cool "bookmarklet".
 
 A bookmarklet is small button that you can drag and drop in your bookmarks.
-The next time you see a cool new site, press on this special bookmark,
-it will add the site to your ownCloud bookmarks.
+The next time you see a cool new site, click on this special bookmark
+to add the site to your ownCloud bookmarks.
 
-To find this bookmark click on gear button on the bottom area of bookmarks app.
+To find this bookmark, click on the gear button at the bottom of the bookmarks app.
 
 

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