[Pkg-sugar-commit] [sugar-browse-activity] 01/01: Modernize short and long description.

[Jonas Smedegaard]

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commit 235ebaf345b6e73fea1219752ed418ec55a899b1
Author: Jonas Smedegaard <dr at jones.dk>
Date:   Wed Apr 22 21:00:32 2015 +0200

    Modernize short and long description.
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 debian/control.in | 17 +++++++++++------
 1 file changed, 11 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)

diff --git a/debian/control.in b/debian/control.in
index 9171f87..a107e7c 100644
--- a/debian/control.in
+++ b/debian/control.in
@@ -20,11 +20,16 @@ Provides: ${cdbs:Provides},
  ${python:Provides}
 Conflicts: ${cdbs:Conflicts}
 Replaces: ${cdbs:Replaces}
-Description: web browsing activity for the Sugar graphical shell
- Sugar is a desktop environment. It is conceived as a platform upon
- which children learn with Sugar Activities. The platform provides
- mechanisms for collaboration, reflection, and exploration. Sugar
- Activities cover a broad range of applications: browsing, drawing,
- composing, writing, programming, etc.
+Description: Sugar Learning Platform - web browsing activity
+ Sugar Learning Platform promotes collaborative learning through Sugar
+ Activities that encourage critical thinking, the heart of a quality
+ education.  Designed from the ground up especially for children, Sugar
+ offers an alternative to traditional “office-desktop” software.
+ .
+ Learner applications in Sugar are called Activities.  They are software
+ packages that automatically save your work - producing specific
+ instances of the Activity that can be resumed at a later time.  Many
+ Activities support learner collaboration, where multiple learners may
+ be invited to join a collective Activity session.
  .
  The Browse activity provides a web browser based on the WebKit engine.

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