[Pkg-sugar-commit] [sugar-chat-activity] 01/01: Modernize short and long description.

[Jonas Smedegaard]

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commit 67b0377d200f107ee5fe731b9a3ec38e5454acd3
Author: Jonas Smedegaard <dr at jones.dk>
Date:   Wed Apr 22 21:04:55 2015 +0200

    Modernize short and long description.
---
 debian/control.in | 8 +++++++-
 1 file changed, 7 insertions(+), 1 deletion(-)

diff --git a/debian/control.in b/debian/control.in
index 23df488..2365546 100644
--- a/debian/control.in
+++ b/debian/control.in
@@ -20,12 +20,18 @@ Provides: ${cdbs:Provides},
  ${python:Provides}
 Conflicts: ${cdbs:Conflicts}
 Replaces: ${cdbs:Replaces}
-Description: chat activity for Sugar Learning Platform
+Description: Sugar Learning Platform - text chatting activity
  Sugar Learning Platform promotes collaborative learning through Sugar
  Activities that encourage critical thinking, the heart of a quality
  education.  Designed from the ground up especially for children, Sugar
  offers an alternative to traditional “office-desktop” software.
  .
+ Learner applications in Sugar are called Activities.  They are software
+ packages that automatically save your work - producing specific
+ instances of the Activity that can be resumed at a later time.  Many
+ Activities support learner collaboration, where multiple learners may
+ be invited to join a collective Activity session.
+ .
  The Chat activity provides a simple interface for collaborative
  discussion, be it between two individuals or among a group as large as
  an entire classroom.  Use Neighborhood View to invite particular people

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